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zaery said:
I really like it! It is quite pretty!
Although, i do have just one peice of criticism/advice:
Check the grammar in the second-to-last Q&A:

"If the laser has been tampered with our "satisfaction guarantee" no longer stands and we will......."

Other than that, it's all good!
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Yeah I see that one was worded pretty poorly. I pretty much threw this all together in 10-15 minutes. Thanks for that heads up!
 





Nice dude, i like the pic of the viper on the 5mW laser page, you could prob get away with selling stronger ones if you have like a contact me if interested in stronger lasers or something, IDK any way great site!
Dave
 
Build your own CMS and use that. It'll make expanding your website much easier. Oh, and if you do that - just make sure to clean your inputs. ;)

The design looks great too! Though as a PHP developer my interest is more under the hood. :)

-Trevor
 
Very, very good job there, man.

Works fast, looks good and it's straight to the point.

My only complaint would be: Try to make the dark grey text just grey (40-50% black), it should be easier to read.

Also, you could animate the buttons with a mouseover, maybe adding some minimal glow behind the text when the mouseover is activated.
 
kingdave2357 said:
Nice dude, i like the pic of the viper on the 5mW laser page, you could prob get away with selling stronger ones if you have like a contact me if interested in stronger lasers or something, IDK any way great site!
Dave
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I like that picture too :P And I have that exact message on my eBay listing. I'm thinking most people will check that link to my eBay page (the lasers there that I sell are about $7 cheaper so if people are smart they'll check that). Thanks!

nikokapo said:
Very, very good job there, man.

Works fast, looks good and it's straight to the point.

My only complaint would be: Try to make the dark grey text just grey (40-50% black), it should be easier to read.

Also, you could animate the buttons with a mouseover, maybe adding some minimal glow behind the text when the mouseover is activated.
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That's a good tip we'll delve into that request. And yeah all the animation for the buttons and other extraneous flashy options are going to be slowly added to the site :)
 
Alright guys a new and improved website is now up!!

Currently work is being focused on a new design for the "Lasers" page so sit tight (we know it looks a little shabbier than the other pages).

Let me know what you think!
 
VERY NICELY DONE, ss256 !!!!! I think that you had a great idea by providing a link to this Forum for a place to provide any answers about lasers that anyone might have. I'd like to see the finished page when you're done with it. Please PM me when you're done, so I don't accidentally miss it ?
 
phoenix77 said:
VERY NICELY DONE, ss256 !!!!! I think that you had a great idea by providing a link to this Forum for a place to provide any answers about lasers that anyone might have. I'd like to see the finished page when you're done with it. Please PM me when you're done, so I don't accidentally miss it ?
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Thanks a bunch! And yeah for sure :) this forum is where I learn everything so why not share it.

Before I get any SEO done though the site only gets maybe 20 views a day :P but the lasers page is the most popular to date!

I'll be sure to post again when the new and improved page is up.
 
Page looks real nice :)

I suggest you talk us through what you're doing in your videos. Or at least add some music or something. It becomes quite boring watching without any sound.
 
Geczy said:
Page looks real nice :)

I suggest you talk us through what you're doing in your videos. Or at least add some music or something. It becomes quite boring watching without any sound.
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Thanks for the tip. When I get my Arctic and Spartan I'll be doing a 3-way review between them and my custom build and I'll be sure to include a video with talking!
 
One more thing, on that same page it says:

"Check out our eBay page to buy right now!"

I can't tell, but is "our eBay page" a different color to symbolize a live link? If it is, it's barely noticeable, I suggest underlining it or something.. :)

EDIT: And it looks like you broke the navigation buttons somehow on this page you just fixed:
http://www.revoctechnologies.com/lasers.html

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Geczy said:
One more thing, on that same page it says:

"Check out our eBay page to buy right now!"

I can't tell, but is "our eBay page" a different color to symbolize a live link? If it is, it's barely noticeable, I suggest underlining it or something.. :)

EDIT: And it looks like you broke the navigation buttons somehow on this page you just fixed:
Revoc Technologies
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I think you're now hired as our website editor :P

The color thing was the old link, the new one is under the picture and will be fixed/clearer in the updated Lasers page.

And yeah, the nav bar does that sometimes when I'm editing it and I have no idea why...
 
Another thing,
Revoc Technologies
"Tap Master's got five different game modes"

Would it be more grammatically correct if it read "Tap Master has five..." ?

Here too: "So, you think you've got what"
"So, you think you have what"
Not sure if this is correct though, I'm not an English major :p

EDIT: More grammar lol, same page:

"Diaballic has been widely praised for it's brilliant and intuitive control system and simple, "Pickup & Play" nature. "

I think it would make more sense if it read
"Diaballic has been widely praised for its brilliant intuitive control system and simple "Pickup & Play" nature."

EDIT2: I noticed what you were trying to say, so I fixed my fix x2 :p

EDIT3: One more..
http://www.revoctechnologies.com/about.html
"it didn't take us long to realize"

Should be:
"it didn't take long for us to realize"
 
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