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[swimminsurfer256]

Another thing,
Revoc Technologies
"Tap Master's got five different game modes"

Would it be more grammatically correct if it read "Tap Master has five..." ?

Here too: "So, you think you've got what"
"So, you think you have what"
Not sure if this is correct though, I'm not an English major

EDIT: More grammar lol, same page:

"Diaballic has been widely praised for it's brilliant and intuitive control system and simple, "Pickup & Play" nature. "

I think it would make more sense if it read
"Diaballic has been widely praised for its brilliant intuitive control system and simple "Pickup & Play" nature."

EDIT2: I noticed what you were trying to say, so I fixed my fix x2

EDIT3: One more..
Revoc Technologies
"it didn't take us long to realize"

Should be:
"it didn't take long for us to realize"

I tink for the beginning we were going for a more colloquial type of tone. For the second one you're definitely right about the "it's" but I think the "and" is just a tone preference and works either way.

Thanks again!

+1 for you

 

[Geczy]

Anytime! I own my own website too and I've been into designing and the whole web business for 6 years now

Check it out if you're bored,

http://mgatesphoto.com

 

[swimminsurfer256]

Anytime! I own my own website too and I've been into designing and the whole web business for 6 years now

Check it out if you're bored,

http://mgatesphoto.com

I like it in its simplicity! Great photos too.

Your "Profile" section is a tad bit lacking though :wave:

 

[Geczy]

Hahaha yeah I still have to fill that out ! I forgot all about that lol

 

[scopeguy20]

Good job, I see only offer of the 5mW 532nm, so, are folks asking you to buy the violet laser on your site? I noticed it is much like my IgorT 8X in output and appearance. So far, I only know of a few compliant BR lasers ava. from LG, CNI and DL too, iirc. -Glenn

 

[swimminsurfer256]

Good job, I see only offer of the 5mW 532nm, so, are folks asking you to buy the violet laser on your site? I noticed it is much like my IgorT 8X in output and appearance. So far, I only know of a few compliant BR lasers ava. from LG, CNI and DL too, iirc. -Glenn

There used to be a lot higher demand for the violet, but not so much anymore. Most people are satisfied buying the greens!

And yeah it is the IgorT host but it has a 12X installed by Dave!