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Do you like my website?

mmykle

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I created this website for a school project a few weeks ago and was wondering what you guys think of it. The point of the project is to 1. Realize how easy it is to publish your opinion/views to the public and 2. Assess what "Marketing Strategy" you used worked the best (How come you got the amount of views you received?).

I thought about posting it on Digg... but its not exactly the best website yet. So, what do you guys think I should do to it? Any and all suggestions would be welcome.
 





It was pretty good, just a few grammer issues here and there. It was layed out nice. The FAQ page was really messed up though:
<!--[if !supportLists]-->1. What the heck are you talking about?<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->a. We are talking, my friend, of the sensation of the religion that is Pastafarianism. The deity which forms the center of this belief system is the Flying Spaghetti Monster(FSM). In short, the FSM ....<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->2. Is Pastafarianism new?<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->a. Pastafarianism has existed in secret for thousands of years, ever since the documentation of creation, only to emerge into the public recently to spread word of his noodly goodness.<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->3. Are you all crazy? You can’t prove this!<!--[endif]-->...
 
its cool that you made it but i lost interested when i read "What if.."
so i voted no, myspace is better
 
Ya, my friend wrote most of the actual text so I'm not surprised there's grammar mistakes lol. And as for the FAQ, it doesn't seem to work in IE too well, probably some incompatible tags but I'm not sure I'll need to work on it. I also still haven't changed the link settings, because there's links on the page, but they look like all the other text. This was a preset layout so I need to work out all the bugs... I'm good at designing website, but the point of this project wasn't to make it pretty looking so I just grabbed a web template.

LRMNmeyer said:
It was pretty good, just a few grammer issues here and there. It was layed out nice. The FAQ page was really messed up though:
<!--[if !supportLists]-->1. What the heck are you talking about?<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->a. We are talking, my friend, of the sensation of the religion that is Pastafarianism. The deity which forms the center of this belief system is the Flying Spaghetti Monster(FSM). In short, the FSM ....<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->2. Is Pastafarianism new?<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->a. Pastafarianism has existed in secret for thousands of years, ever since the documentation of creation, only to emerge into the public recently to spread word of his noodly goodness.<!--[endif]-->

<!--[if !supportLists]-->3. Are you all crazy? You can’t prove this!<!--[endif]-->...

Lol, shame on you, nothing is worse then MySpace!! I'm just joking... sorta ::)

travislikescoolstuff said:
its cool that you made it but i lost interested when i read "What if.."
so i voted no, myspace is better
 
Myspace can go suck a ....

;D

No, really :P

The site looks good tho, just fix up the grammar and its all good.
 
el-taco said:
When and how did you become a pastafarian? I am one myself.

When did I realize I was God?
Well, one day I was praying and I realized I was talking to myself.
-- Peter O'Toole
 
I can't remember how I found out about it, its been a long time. If you feel compelled to send that site to other people then please do!!
el-taco said:
When and how did you become a pastafarian? I am one myself.

Ha, thats a great quote! ;D
daguin said:
[quote author=el-taco link=1228778563/0#5 date=1228823461]When and how did you become a pastafarian? I am one myself.

When did I realize I was God?
Well, one day I was praying and I realized I was talking to myself.
-- Peter O'Toole

[/quote]
 
daguin said:
When did I realize I was God?
Well, one day I was praying and I realized I was talking to myself.
-- Peter O'Toole

Do you mind if that goes in my sig?
 
i've seen better, but NOTHING is worse than myspace and facebook.




i like it because it's FSM, but you should have better graphics...just use photoshop and not paint :P
 
daguin said:
[quote author=el-taco link=1228778563/0#5 date=1228823461]When and how did you become a pastafarian? I am one myself.

When did I realize I was God?
Well, one day I was praying and I realized I was talking to myself.
-- Peter O'Toole

[/quote]

See? this is why I love you so much.
 
lol I kinda like it because its not graphically great. But I guess I should make it better. I'll try something like what they have at venganza.
Niko said:
i've seen better, but NOTHING is worse than myspace and facebook.

i like it because it's FSM, but you should have better graphics...just use photoshop and not paint :P

Huh, I wonder why you got a DNS error? Or why any of you are having problems. I know theres a problem on the FAQ page with IE... maybe its because I'm using a free hosting site. Their servers could have been busy or something idk.

Montana64 said:
It won't open for me either.  :(

Ted
 





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