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Newbie here! Just wanted to share one observation. There are language errors all over the place. Sorry if I am being too blunt but maybe fixing those may allow your site to look more professional.

EDIT: For example on the Sign In page the word account is spelt as accout.
 
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cheejiayuan512 said:
Newbie here! Just wanted to share one observation. There are language errors all over the place. Sorry if I am being too blunt but maybe fixing those may allow your site to look more professional.

EDIT: For example on the Sign In page the word account is spelt as accout.
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Is that because of your location? Because it looks fine to me here in America...
 
One thing that kinda put me off about the site were the words china and cheap. When I Google your site I see, "Get cheap china products!"

Please don't take offense. I do know that some product from china are actually quite good! But most people would probably disagree with me.

Anyways it just kinda sends out a bad message. When I Google the site with my Firefox browser the title reads, "Everbuying.com: Buy Cheap - Buy Cheap China Products at ..."
The whole message,"Get cheap china products at wholesale prices" doesn't display on my browser. So I only read, "Get cheap china product." That is probably going to be a turn off for a few customers.
They will be thinking. Cheap as in "inexpensive" or cheap as in "crappy". The fact that it says "cheap china products" I'm sure quite some people will take it as "crappy."

Maybe you could change it to something like, "Wholesale prices for products from china?" or something so it sounds less "cheap" and if the browser cuts off some wording it might just say, "Wholesale prices for products..."

So this is before you even enter the site. After when I go in I just see the words cheap everywhere. Now when I see the word cheap plastered all over a site make me a bit wary of the seller and company. Like, "Weekly cheap deals" or, "Buy cheap tablet pc" or, "Buy cheap Women's clothing." Maybe you could use the words discounted or wholesale instead. For example instead of, "Weekly cheap deals" It could be something like, "Weekly discounted items."

Just my two cents.

Apart from that I think that your site is really good. Short load time and easy to navigate. Really like that fact that you have a live chat.
 
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Agree. Cheap is often used as an synonym for crappy. Wholesale or low prices sounds better.

About the metered lasers in the 5mW green laser pointer offer kitler asked for. It is obvious this are different lasers shown there. The hosts are totally different.

But I must admit this is irritating a bit the way it is presented there. Some people may think they will get the power shown in the pictures at the buttom. Last but not least at a first look I was reading 1.200mw and 2.500mw and was thinking 1200mW and 2500mW before I realized the 1 and 2 are meant as points to the pictures.

So there are some cosmetic issues that can be done better.
 
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honeyx said:
So the search engine needs to be tuned for different types in writing it and to even recognize for parts of a word. It would be also useful if there would be made some suggestions to what someone is searching for like for example Ebay is doing.
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great feedback, thanks!
 
herunotsurugi said:
One thing that kinda put me off about the site were the words china and cheap. When I Google your site I see, "Get cheap china products!"

Please don't take offense. I do know that some product from china are actually quite good! But most people would probably disagree with me.

Anyways it just kinda sends out a bad message. When I Google the site with my Firefox browser the title reads, "Everbuying.com: Buy Cheap - Buy Cheap China Products at ..."
The whole message,"Get cheap china products at wholesale prices" doesn't display on my browser. So I only read, "Get cheap china product." That is probably going to be a turn off for a few customers.
They will be thinking. Cheap as in "inexpensive" or cheap as in "crappy". The fact that it says "cheap china products" I'm sure quite some people will take it as "crappy."

Maybe you could change it to something like, "Wholesale prices for products from china?" or something so it sounds less "cheap" and if the browser cuts off some wording it might just say, "Wholesale prices for products..."

So this is before you even enter the site. After when I go in I just see the words cheap everywhere. Now when I see the word cheap plastered all over a site make me a bit wary of the seller and company. Like, "Weekly cheap deals" or, "Buy cheap tablet pc" or, "Buy cheap Women's clothing." Maybe you could use the words discounted or wholesale instead. For example instead of, "Weekly cheap deals" It could be something like, "Weekly discounted items."

Just my two cents.

Apart from that I think that your site is really good. Short load time and easy to navigate. Really like that fact that you have a live chat.
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great suggestions. I'm new to the company and you confirmed what I've been feeling as well!
 
Wow didn't expect to win. This is awesome:)
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This is what I want. Thanks!
 
Blake and Josh, you guys are awesome. Look forward to receiving my flashlight :D I will be keeping an eye on the website and continue to give feedback since you are being very generous with this giveaway! Keep up the great work, it will go a long way :beer:
 
I love lasers!
i'll say this website looks illegitimate. as a cautious web user, my first thought was that this was some kind of spam to get my email address. the big, pixelated warnlasers.com advertisement at the top of the page just looks like dangerous clickbait. the navigation buttons all over the page are small and not logically arranged. the multicolored links at the top of the page looks, again, like clickbait. who are you? what is this site? what does it do, exactly? that should be clear as soon as the page opens..
good luck!
 
circles said:
I love lasers!
i'll say this website looks illegitimate. as a cautious web user, my first thought was that this was some kind of spam to get my email address. the big, pixelated warnlasers.com advertisement at the top of the page just looks like dangerous clickbait. the navigation buttons all over the page are small and not logically arranged. the multicolored links at the top of the page looks, again, like clickbait. who are you? what is this site? what does it do, exactly? that should be clear as soon as the page opens..
good luck!
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You are talking about LPF and not everbuying.com.......just a heads up, you totally missed the right website to review
 
I'm kinda frustrated, but what can we expect from another Chinese sales site? :)
 
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The code they gave me for my prize doesnt work :(
EDIT- ATM i'll assume it's a mistake btw!
2nd EDIT: They very kindly re-did the code and it worked! Very happy will most definitely be back to their store!
 
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