I would change the description:
"Extremely High Powered LOC Laser Diode" - I dunno why, but when I see the phrase "Extremely High Powered" I feel like I'm gonna be scammed. I'd change it to something like "High Powered LOC Laser Diode running at xxx mA"
also altough you don't sell complete lasers, you should at least ship the driver within the package with instructions on how to put it together. or sell it complete, but somehow "bypass" the laser when you ship it, so it can't be just turned on but it requieres removing some seal or soldering one wire or so in order to make it work
for your customers it would be nice to have a video with LPM test there
and if you want to make business here, you should send few units to some reputable members for a review
what diode will it use? 350+ mW seems kinda high for the loc's we have seen so far.
also ditch the whole "this is one of the most powerfull lasers on the market" makes you sound like Wickedlasers...and we all know that there are lasers that go 350+ mW to even 500+mW.